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Friday, December 21, 2007

Walking on the bridges alone and aloof,
Wanting to run away to some unknown's land,
With no intruders into my territory
No one to instruct me,No one to restrict me
Deaf-ears to the fights and arguments
Detached from the world around

Emotions suppressed inside the heart,
As compressed as a volcano
Layered with a sheet of solitude
Locked up in the dark gloomy world
Not willing to open up and take flight
Refusing to get the tears wiped.

The world seems negative,
Everything looks fake
Some pretend to you,
Some fool around with you,
Some tend to use you,
U need to strive across
lest you lose the wars.

-Written(Read as 'tried') by me.

It has been a long time since I wrote something like this.Infact though I have tried a lot of times I could NOT end up successful.Even now I haven't.When I started with this,I was in a low mood and my spirits were getting back to normal later with time.So I myself could feel the confusion in the expression of thoughts in these verses.But then,I just wanted to pen down everything without leaving it in between.If u like it,then well and good(Rare case I guess).If not,lets call it 'Chumma poem' :P

-Haripriya

2 Comments:

At 8:34 PM , Anonymous Anonymous said...

U started off good and u got confused in the middle...he he he
anyway nice try...nice poem...
Im impressed with the first n the last stanzas...

Walking on the bridges alone and aloof,
Wanting to run away to some unknown's land,
With no intruders into my territory
No one to instruct me,No one to restrict me
Deaf-ears to the fights and arguments
Detached from the world around

Yeah Sometimes i too feel the same.. Depressed n down... Wat to do,its all a part of life...

"The world seems negative,
Everything looks fake
Some pretend to you,
Some fool around with you,
Some tend to use you,
U need to strive across"

People are different..Everybody is selfish no their own way.. They Don't look fake.. they definitely are fake... Nobody can be true cuz life is like tat..They have to lead their own life. they don have time to think of u....

 
At 6:09 AM , Blogger Smruthi said...

nice soulful poem!
'n its nice to know many ppl feel the same as i do!(wat t poem speaks bout)

 

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